Fun with Feedback
Saturday, June 6th, 2009Greetings proud Omnomnomnians! I, the Somewhat Almighty God of Pie, demand feedback on my English Extension 2 Major Work!
In case you’re unfamiliar with the NSW English syllabus, the basic idea is that you spend the whole damn year working on one bloody great story, play, essay, whatever. And this is mine. I thought that in order to get a broader range of perspectives, I’d try to get it on the internet and see what people there said. After spending an hour shouting at DeviantArt, I called Mechlord and learned how to store files in the FTP. I’m not going to tell you anything about the play for the sheer fun of secrecy. You’ll have to read it and find out what it is. I promise that the file is 100% safe for work and for your computer.
The file is here
Leave feedback either in the “comments” section, or on this thread in the Übercharged.net forums.
What I’m asking for is five points of feedback;
1. What did you think of the play?
2. Are there any improvements you can suggest?
3. Did it remind you of anything?
4. What did you think that it was actually about?
5. How the hell do I get word documents onto DeviantArt?
Cheers.
